Rather than individual people taking part in their local community, they are instead choosing to take more interest in people online. In my opinion, I think that love and money are both necessary.
This is very significant. For that reason, I would claim that they both make their own, vital contribution to the creation of a happy family.
Task 1 is very short, so spend most of your time on Task 2. The essay is well structured — each paragraph announces its topic clearly [TS] and the introduction announces the opinion of the writer.
Moreover, love fosters maturity because each member of a couple no longer has responsibility only for themselves, but also for their partner.
You make frequent grammatical errors and some errors can cause some difficulty for the reader. You attempt to use less common vocabulary but with some inaccuracy and you make some errors in word formation, but they do not impede communication.
Also the writer has a tendency to be repetitive.